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You are waking around the Akatsuki hall. It’s a big place with lots of doors, and hall ways. You’re trying to find someone’s room but you keep making wrong turns. Finally you come to a hall way that has each of the Akatsuki member’s bedrooms. Some of the Akatsuki are out on missions right now, some had to stay back and watch the base. As always you are one of the people who had to stay back and watch the base.
You walk down the hall looking at each door as you go past. They all have sighs on the door telling you whose room it is. You finally come to the door you want. The sigh on the door says “Keep Out!!! That Mean’s you Tobi!!! Un!!!” You swallow hard and slowly open the door. I hope he won’t be back for a while, you think.
You have only been in the Akatsuki for two months but you already have a crush on one of the members. You pull a letter out of you pocket, it took you a month to write this letter. It had to be perfect! So yeah it took a while. You slowly walk over to the bed and place the letter on the pillow.
You turn to leave the room, but you stop as you notice someone it standing in the doorway. It was Deidara. You feel you’re face heat up.
“What are you doing in here?” He asks. You open you’re mouth so reply, but no words come out. You can’t believe it! Deidara has caught you doing something that someone in grade six would do!
He walks over to the bed and picks up the letter you had put on his pillow. He turns around so he is facing you, you snatch the letter from his hands. You don’t want him to read it anymore. It’s to embarrassing.
“Is that letter for me, UN?” You nod
“Then let me read it.” You shake you head. You want to say something, but you voice has left you. “Please.” Deidara said, he hold out his hand, you slowly hand him the letter. He opens it and starts reading it.
He is gonna laugh at me. You think. You look down at you feet, waiting for him to laugh at you. But nothing happens. You hear no laughing; all you hear is the sound of you and Deidara breathing. There is no other sound. You look up at Deidara. He is smiling. Not a big smile, just a small one. You stare at him, confused.
“You’re not gonna laugh at me?” You ask quietly
“Now why would I do that?” He asks. “I have a secret to tell you.”
“A-and what w-would that be?” You ask. You feel yourself blush as he takes a step towards you.
“I like you too.” He whispers in you’re ear. It sends shivers up you spine. You’re blush darkens.
“R-really?” You ask. Deidara pulls you into a soft hug. This action shocks you, and you don’t know what to do.  
“Really.” He says. You smile and hug him back. This is the happiest moment in you’re life. You wish it would never end!
“Hey Deidara, have you seen-“ Hidan had come into the room. You blush, and Deidara glares at him. “Oh. I’ll come back later, I guess.” Hidan says and he leaves the room.
“Damn Hidan.” Deidara mutters. You look up at Deidara, and he looks down at you. You just noticed that Deidara is a full head taller then you. You both stare into each others eyes for a moment, then Deidara slowly moves his head down. You know what is going to come next. Deidara’s lips softly press against yours. You slowly close you’re eyes and lose yourself in the kiss.
You’re life is now complete. Deidara pulls back from the kiss and looks at you. You smile at him, and he smiles back.
You hug him once more before you leave the room. You walk down the halls with a huge grin on you’re face. Yep, you’re life is now complete.

The End
OKAY! This is (as you may have guessed) a story for Akatsuki fangirls! This chapter is about Deidara! I have already written....3 chapters! BUT! I want to see how people like the story! So comment, fav, give me pointers, whatever! As long as I am making fangirls happy I am happy!!!! ^^

If you have an Akatsuki member you would like me to do a chapter on please tell me and I will get right on it!
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hyper-yet-bored Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
XD lol
Omg.that fits me to a T.Im gonna put one of my akatsuki stories on here.Buts anyways, i like it.
hyper-yet-bored Mar 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lol im glad you like it ^^
if u do post i going to read! i must read! for i am! A FANGIRL! XD sorry random
thank u!hopes u like it...when i eventually put it on
fairyjessica9 Feb 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the first chapter. Mabye you could do a Sasori fangirl story. Sasori is like my favorite character.
hyper-yet-bored Feb 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I have done a sasori chapter along with hidan and tobi
fairyjessica9 Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
He he. After I typed the comment I found it. How about Kakuzu or Zetsu?
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