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You are waking around the Akatsuki hall. It’s a big place with lots of doors, and hall ways. You’re trying to find someone’s room but you keep making wrong turns. Finally you come to a hall way that has each of the Akatsuki member’s bedrooms. Some of the Akatsuki are out on missions right now, some had to stay back and watch the base. As always you are one of the people who had to stay back and watch the base.
You walk down the hall looking at each door as you go past. They all have sighs on the door telling you whose room it is. You finally come to the door you want. The sigh on the door says “Keep Out!!! That Mean’s you Tobi!!! Un!!!” You swallow hard and slowly open the door. I hope he won’t be back for a while, you think.
You have only been in the Akatsuki for two months but you already have a crush on one of the members. You pull a letter out of you pocket, it took you a month to write this letter. It had to be perfect! So yeah it took a while. You slowly walk over to the bed and place the letter on the pillow.
You turn to leave the room, but you stop as you notice someone it standing in the doorway. It was Deidara. You feel you’re face heat up.
“What are you doing in here?” He asks. You open you’re mouth so reply, but no words come out. You can’t believe it! Deidara has caught you doing something that someone in grade six would do!
He walks over to the bed and picks up the letter you had put on his pillow. He turns around so he is facing you, you snatch the letter from his hands. You don’t want him to read it anymore. It’s to embarrassing.
“Is that letter for me, UN?” You nod
“Then let me read it.” You shake you head. You want to say something, but you voice has left you. “Please.” Deidara said, he hold out his hand, you slowly hand him the letter. He opens it and starts reading it.
He is gonna laugh at me. You think. You look down at you feet, waiting for him to laugh at you. But nothing happens. You hear no laughing; all you hear is the sound of you and Deidara breathing. There is no other sound. You look up at Deidara. He is smiling. Not a big smile, just a small one. You stare at him, confused.
“You’re not gonna laugh at me?” You ask quietly
“Now why would I do that?” He asks. “I have a secret to tell you.”
“A-and what w-would that be?” You ask. You feel yourself blush as he takes a step towards you.
“I like you too.” He whispers in you’re ear. It sends shivers up you spine. You’re blush darkens.
“R-really?” You ask. Deidara pulls you into a soft hug. This action shocks you, and you don’t know what to do.  
“Really.” He says. You smile and hug him back. This is the happiest moment in you’re life. You wish it would never end!
“Hey Deidara, have you seen-“ Hidan had come into the room. You blush, and Deidara glares at him. “Oh. I’ll come back later, I guess.” Hidan says and he leaves the room.
“Damn Hidan.” Deidara mutters. You look up at Deidara, and he looks down at you. You just noticed that Deidara is a full head taller then you. You both stare into each others eyes for a moment, then Deidara slowly moves his head down. You know what is going to come next. Deidara’s lips softly press against yours. You slowly close you’re eyes and lose yourself in the kiss.
You’re life is now complete. Deidara pulls back from the kiss and looks at you. You smile at him, and he smiles back.
You hug him once more before you leave the room. You walk down the halls with a huge grin on you’re face. Yep, you’re life is now complete.

The End
OKAY! This is (as you may have guessed) a story for Akatsuki fangirls! This chapter is about Deidara! I have already written....3 chapters! BUT! I want to see how people like the story! So comment, fav, give me pointers, whatever! As long as I am making fangirls happy I am happy!!!! ^^

If you have an Akatsuki member you would like me to do a chapter on please tell me and I will get right on it!
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Blazestar412 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOLLLL
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
XD lol
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Kurohana-DeidarasGal Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2010
Omg.that fits me to a T.Im gonna put one of my akatsuki stories on here.Buts anyways, i like it.
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lol im glad you like it ^^
if u do post i going to read! i must read! for i am! A FANGIRL! XD sorry random
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Kurohana-DeidarasGal Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010
thank u!hopes u like it...when i eventually put it on
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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Kurohana-DeidarasGal Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2010
XD
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fairyjessica9 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the first chapter. Mabye you could do a Sasori fangirl story. Sasori is like my favorite character.
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I have done a sasori chapter along with hidan and tobi
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fairyjessica9 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
He he. After I typed the comment I found it. How about Kakuzu or Zetsu?
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
im working on itachi right now but i have a bit of writters block ^^'''
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fairyjessica9 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
OOOOH. I get that all the time. Hopefully both of our writers block will pass. Have you heard that on March 12-14th there is a Megacon. I will be going. It will be my first one.
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
i hope so ^^ and no i did not. i live in aussie and supanova will be coming up on April ^^ im going as Deidara ^^ i will be my....3rd or 4th ^^
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fairyjessica9 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, we are going as the same character! Thats soo cool. Do you think you can tell me about anime conventions? I don't know what to do at them.
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
omg! no ways! lol
well its pretty simple. there will be lots of little shop things selling stuff like plushies, shirt, bags, hat ect. ect. there will most likey be comps like eating contest and stuff. i entered an ice cream eatting one it was fun ^^ so the point is to really go and have fun and hang out with other otaku at the last one i went to they had japanese food like opocopus dumpling. they sound werid but they taste beautiful! it will be fun! but if you go in a group you might get lost XD i did
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CrystalOcean7 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
Omg! This is such a creative idea. I love that fact it is written in second-person and anyone who reads it feel like it is themselfs.

Your a good writter :hug:
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ hehehe thats the reason its in second person so fangirl feel like they are there ^^


thank you so much!!! *hugs*
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CrystalOcean7 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009
:glomp: np
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Hypermanic Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
Whoop! I is a happy fangirl! :love: Very happy!

Are the other chapters actually continuing this, or do they pair with other members?

Either way, :love:
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehehe another happy fangirl to the list ^^
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Hypermanic Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2009
Yay! ^^
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giedruciuks Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009
You made me happy with this story!:iconiluplz: You should post those other chapters too ^^
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
i have post them. hidan, sasori, pein, and tobi all have a chapter ^^
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giedruciuks Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2009
Yay!!! :iconteamoplz:
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehehe im glad u like my story ^^
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sephypsycologist Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
OHMYWORDOMIWORDOMIWORD~:heart: I feel like a bird right now. I'm gonna fly away, that was so good! :icondeideiplz:<--He's perfect really! XD
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehehehe im glad i made another fangirl happy ^^
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munken-mille Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
oh so cute!! :aww:
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:iconhyper-yet-bored:
hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you ^^
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munken-mille Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome
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Lame-Ino-Girl Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this fangirl is really happy, and her life is not complete unless i do one thing... *grabs chainsaw* HIDAN!!! i've got a present for you!!! :icondragoninsane:
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Tasunai-Naru Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
Can I come? I have an axe! XD

Me likies Deidara. *glomps*
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Lame-Ino-Girl Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
of course, the more the merrier!!
muahahahahahaha!!!
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
O_O calm down onee-sama
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Lame-Ino-Girl Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
fine, but you rewined our fun, you know...

P.S. :iconvexenlaughplz:
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
uh.....ok
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smileyanimeface Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
lol i used to wite all my fan fics on quizilla this has now inspired me to wite em oh here

and btw ITS ASWOMW take it from a ex deidara fangirl XD
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
*eplodes due to too much happiness* YAY!!!! not only do you like it but I inspired you to write fanfics!!!! YAY!!!
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smileyanimeface Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
*splodes deu to you eploding also feu to being dared to eat 2 spoonfuls of suger* yay i am acctully gonna wite one as soon as i getsss home tmorrows from hell im meant school XD
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
lol i think of a lot of fanfics but never get around to writting them! this! is the ONLY one i wrote when i was thinking of it the others are in my mind *points to head*
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smileyanimeface Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
lol same XD
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
it annoys my friends when i tell them about it but never put it on the net ^^
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smileyanimeface Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
lol
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uncle-sollux Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yay!!!
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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palmtreehero Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
un~! >.< im not really akatsuki fan but...
i think im in love. :iconiloveyouplz: madi-chan is so evill! :evillaugh:
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
omg you like my story too?! *sparkely eyes*
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palmtreehero Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
xDD
:love:
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hyper-yet-bored Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY!!!! *explodes due to too much happiness*
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palmtreehero Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
xD
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